Minggu, 28 Oktober 2012

Increasing sains ^ ^

Hallooo
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my pals ,,,

Welcome to my shared blog which many reflections and story about me and my lecture. Don't be bored to read and give comment on my blog. Lasr meeting there wasn't a presentation. We only had some workshops.On  Wednesday I wrote a process paragraph. I wrote about how to make a hard-cooked egg. I have some mistakes on my paragraph. Especially the punctuation. For example, I should gave a space after the fullstop. Then, I identified Ima's paragraph.She wrote about hair veiked treatment. It was very interesting Paragraph and good idea.But , she should be carefull for the grammatical.

  For the following workshop on Friday, we reviewed about definition paragraph.I wrote about definition of Dejavu. The reviewer said that I had some mistakes in grammar. So, I had to be carefull for the grammatical. I identified Zaki's paragraph. She wrote about the definition of friendship. It was good idea but she also to be carefull for the grammatical of each sentences.

  Day by day I identify my friend's paragraph in different tittle and word. But it makes me understand deeply about paragraph and also it increases my knowledge from the article which my firends made.

Rabu, 17 Oktober 2012

Feel cozy..... yeahh ^_-

  I'm sorry for being late to post the reflection for last meeting. Last meeting there was workshop about cause and effect paragraph. I reviewed Riza's paragraph. On her paragraph I found mistake on writing of each word for example "write" she wrote just " wite" she didn't correct her writing. But, she had a good enough ide of paragraph cause and effect. 
  For the day of presentation. Unfortunately, I was absent on   last Wednesday. So, I didn't know exactly what and how the presenters presented their paragraph.
  
 That's my reflection. I feel cozy with this class. Not only enjoy but also I get understanding of the material. 
heheh spirit for all....
 
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