Don't give up ! ♥

Last week, we composed 2 paragraphs illustrative paragraph and persuasive paragraph. I reviewed Nita's paragraphs. The first was illustrative paragraph. She wrote it good enough. It gave specific examples that show the point. It illustrated the point enough.  I also reviewed her persuasive paragraph which about how important to learn english.  Each paragraph persuaded the reader so as to learn english. It was right idea. I thought her paragraphs were good enough. But she must be careful used the hypen and also the specific grammatical. I think not only Nita but also you and I have to learn more and practice more about english grammar. 

On this semester We had made wide range of paragraphs. We also reviewed our friends paragraphs. Exactly, we have known the characteristics of each type of paragraphs. we also have already known our mistakes by reviewing paragraphs. The common mistake was grammar.

This reflection is interesting to investigate in the context of English studies.

Don't give up ,guys !

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Argumentative paragraph

Last week, on Wednesday,October 24,2012. We had workshop. We reviewed about argumentative paragpraph. I reviewed Dini's paragraph. She wrote about "Smoking in public place". It told about her arguments about smoking in public place and also the effects of smoking. It gave good reasons and supporting evidence to defend the position. It also considerd the opposing views also the examples. She wrote her arguments from start to finish and also gave the conclusion of the whole paragraph of the topic. I found some mistakes from the grammatical and the spelling. For instance, She wrote "Public places". She wrote place on its context using "es" as a plural. I thought that it didn't need "es" as plural because public place is general. But she had a good idea of the paragraph which she made. 

The conclusion is we have to be careful on the grammatical of each paragraph andbe corrected.

ganbatte ::♡

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Welcome to my shared blog which many reflections and story about me and my lecture. Don't be bored to read and give comment on my blog. Lasr meeting there wasn't a presentation. We only had some workshops.On  Wednesday I wrote a process paragraph. I wrote about how to make a hard-cooked egg. I have some mistakes on my paragraph. Especially the punctuation. For example, I should gave a space after the fullstop. Then, I identified Ima's paragraph.She wrote about hair veiked treatment. It was very interesting Paragraph and good idea.But , she should be carefull for the grammatical.

  For the following workshop on Friday, we reviewed about definition paragraph.I wrote about definition of Dejavu. The reviewer said that I had some mistakes in grammar. So, I had to be carefull for the grammatical. I identified Zaki's paragraph. She wrote about the definition of friendship. It was good idea but she also to be carefull for the grammatical of each sentences.

  Day by day I identify my friend's paragraph in different tittle and word. But it makes me understand deeply about paragraph and also it increases my knowledge from the article which my firends made.

Feel cozy..... yeahh ^_-

  I'm sorry for being late to post the reflection for last meeting. Last meeting there was workshop about cause and effect paragraph. I reviewed Riza's paragraph. On her paragraph I found mistake on writing of each word for example "write" she wrote just " wite" she didn't correct her writing. But, she had a good enough ide of paragraph cause and effect. 

  For the day of presentation. Unfortunately, I was absent on   last Wednesday. So, I didn't know exactly what and how the presenters presented their paragraph.

  

 That's my reflection. I feel cozy with this class. Not only enjoy but also I get understanding of the material. 

heheh spirit for all....

 

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What a terrible day

 On 27th September, We had a presentation like usually. The presenter were Aci,Aris,Rois, and Ima. Aci presented about Pollution which was a definition paragraph. Aris, His paragraph like an essay, because there was a space after the first paragraph. But, Actually He make one paragraph but in 2 form of paragraph. So, he gave space on them. He decided that his paragraph was an argumantative paragraph. When Miss Vita asked which one the topic and topic sentences. He didn't answer well. He looked confused about the differences between topic and also topic sentence. He looked so nervous when Miss Vita asked continuely. I didn't know what happened with Aris. Because we've learned about topic and topic sentence in the previous semester I thought. The condition of class was tranquil. Miss Vita was angry to us. She looked so upset to us. But, It was just a moment. She told all what she felt. We apologized to her. And continued the next presenter.

That's all my reflection. May be we have to do and we have to be the best and learn more about the previous lesson.Because we have made upset our beloved lecturer. We are really sorry Miss Vita -_-

Understanding deeply,,aha ^_^

     Last meeting we still did which similar with the pervious meeting. We corrected assignment which was paragraph. We also analyzed paragraph each other by listening songs which made us felt enjoy..yeaahh :D. We continued for the presenter who presented the next paragraphs. There were 6 presenter they were Riza,Via,Dini,Mega,Aini, and Mega. Riza presented about contrast paragraph. The text was contrast paragraph.  She explained that contrast paragraph tells about the differences between two objects, while the comparison paragraph about their similarities. Fia   presented about argumentative paragraph, according to her it was an argumentative paragraph, because it tells about the author's opinion about literature. According to me it was explanation.  Because Miss.Vita said that " an argumentative paragraph the author should be determine a clear motion, it means that the author have to tell whether she/ he agree or disagree with the issue". But Fia was still stayed on her opinion,But finally with a long disscussion She agreed that her paragrapf was expalanation. hehe what a pity fia : D. Aini  presented about a cause and effect paragraph but it was not really good paragraph, because there  was no a concluding sentence.  

  I really surpised with one of the presenters. She was Mega. She only presented and explained her paragraph and went bact to her sit. Because her paragraph was clear that was definition  paragraph. Her  paragraph was good. So no body comment her paragraph. All of the students just said "YES" when Miss Vita asked  we agreed or not with her opinion aboyt her paragraph. hasssshhhh:D. 

  The disscussion last meeting was really made my understanding deeply about paragraph. Becaused we already discussed them approxmately 3 weeks. But I like this way for studying or learning about writting. Good job guys. Nd thanks for Miss Vita :* :D

That's all my reflection. I'm sorry to post late.