Jumat, 16 November 2012

Don't give up ! ♥

Last week, we composed 2 paragraphs illustrative paragraph and persuasive paragraph. I reviewed Nita's paragraphs. The first was illustrative paragraph. She wrote it good enough. It gave specific examples that show the point. It illustrated the point enough.  I also reviewed her persuasive paragraph which about how important to learn english.  Each paragraph persuaded the reader so as to learn english. It was right idea. I thought her paragraphs were good enough. But she must be careful used the hypen and also the specific grammatical. I think not only Nita but also you and I have to learn more and practice more about english grammar. 

On this semester We had made wide range of paragraphs. We also reviewed our friends paragraphs. Exactly, we have known the characteristics of each type of paragraphs. we also have already known our mistakes by reviewing paragraphs. The common mistake was grammar.

This reflection is interesting to investigate in the context of English studies.

Don't give up ,guys !

^_^  ♥♥

2 komentar:

  1. yes you are right put...
    we need to be more carefull in grammar.
    would like to help me?
    I felt so hard and found many difficulties in making ilustrative paragraph.so if you have some sources about making a good ilustrative paragraph, could you please share us, especially me.thanks in advance. ^_*

    BalasHapus
  2. I'm also careless i grammar, and rather confused to use comma...
    I have sources about illustration, but most of them the topic sentence state about what we like or dislike. And I don't find how to write illustration like example of illustration from miss. Vita.

    BalasHapus