Don't give up ! ♥

Last week, we composed 2 paragraphs illustrative paragraph and persuasive paragraph. I reviewed Nita's paragraphs. The first was illustrative paragraph. She wrote it good enough. It gave specific examples that show the point. It illustrated the point enough.  I also reviewed her persuasive paragraph which about how important to learn english.  Each paragraph persuaded the reader so as to learn english. It was right idea. I thought her paragraphs were good enough. But she must be careful used the hypen and also the specific grammatical. I think not only Nita but also you and I have to learn more and practice more about english grammar. 

On this semester We had made wide range of paragraphs. We also reviewed our friends paragraphs. Exactly, we have known the characteristics of each type of paragraphs. we also have already known our mistakes by reviewing paragraphs. The common mistake was grammar.

This reflection is interesting to investigate in the context of English studies.

Don't give up ,guys !

^_^  ♥♥

Argumentative paragraph

Last week, on Wednesday,October 24,2012. We had workshop. We reviewed about argumentative paragpraph. I reviewed Dini's paragraph. She wrote about "Smoking in public place". It told about her arguments about smoking in public place and also the effects of smoking. It gave good reasons and supporting evidence to defend the position. It also considerd the opposing views also the examples. She wrote her arguments from start to finish and also gave the conclusion of the whole paragraph of the topic. I found some mistakes from the grammatical and the spelling. For instance, She wrote "Public places". She wrote place on its context using "es" as a plural. I thought that it didn't need "es" as plural because public place is general. But she had a good idea of the paragraph which she made. 

The conclusion is we have to be careful on the grammatical of each paragraph andbe corrected.

ganbatte ::♡