Minggu, 28 Oktober 2012

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my pals ,,,

Welcome to my shared blog which many reflections and story about me and my lecture. Don't be bored to read and give comment on my blog. Lasr meeting there wasn't a presentation. We only had some workshops.On  Wednesday I wrote a process paragraph. I wrote about how to make a hard-cooked egg. I have some mistakes on my paragraph. Especially the punctuation. For example, I should gave a space after the fullstop. Then, I identified Ima's paragraph.She wrote about hair veiked treatment. It was very interesting Paragraph and good idea.But , she should be carefull for the grammatical.

  For the following workshop on Friday, we reviewed about definition paragraph.I wrote about definition of Dejavu. The reviewer said that I had some mistakes in grammar. So, I had to be carefull for the grammatical. I identified Zaki's paragraph. She wrote about the definition of friendship. It was good idea but she also to be carefull for the grammatical of each sentences.

  Day by day I identify my friend's paragraph in different tittle and word. But it makes me understand deeply about paragraph and also it increases my knowledge from the article which my firends made.

2 komentar:

  1. Hmmmm.... you are right. pleasuring and enjoying system of learning to improve our English capability. So, many friends of ours do the continuous mistake of grammatical. we should reread our work before submitting, or check it before. it can minimize our fault. (8,<)

    BalasHapus
  2. sure... I never feel bored to read your composition. hehehe...It can increase my vocabularies and improve my writing...thank you...

    BalasHapus